Tight blue, silver eyes drop
onto my shoulder
past the pavement unseen.
Thirst borne of wanting
for things long forgotten
burns in the afterglow
of peptic slow dances,
churns in the left behind
of feckless dull hatred.
Idiocy cracking wise
cuts smoldering through my doldrums
while backwash borne of benders past
weighs heavy on my breath.
I step out into tree lined landscaped
boxes owned by corporate corpses,
as I drop stoned out of daylight
into nightscapes caged in Walmart.
Walmart, the one true equalizer!
Walmart, home to the great unwashed!
Walmart, sanitary evil incarnate!
Walmart, from womb to tomb to drunken temperance.
Walmart, you make difficult misery effortless.
The cinematic black horizon
lightens onto morning
while silver blinded like minded
neophytes creep naked.
Bruised brown splotches layered
onto concrete pouring
into ragged potholes
consecrating my religion.
Suburban dreams melt to urban blight
as I walk toward a night draped sullen.
Walmart fades to steel and glass
lit cavalcades sky scraping,
a demographic born of gridlock
block after block after shocking,
as I step out into traffic
riddled yellow taxi madness,
insane asylums piled on top
of hallucinating lovely.
Gone, vanilla sadness.
Gone.
This was great...different!(as expected from us)
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was just wandering around your nice layout and then the repetition of "walmart" got stuck into my eyes, and went through it over again!
"from womb to tomb to drunken temperance"
"Gone, vanilla sadness"
"insane asylums"
'cinematic black horizon'
"corporate corpses"
- some nice, catchy phrases indeed!
Not abstract, we don't call it abstract, it's good, healthy and wholesome!
Not much "critical jargon" this time, next time, someday...this is mu first hit here (mentioned)
:-)
very nice "write"
thanks!
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